This was my first idea for my magazine front cover, looking back it seems childish, disorganised, and cluttered. The colours do not compliment each other and the image does not tell the correct story as there is no chemistry between the characters. I like the idea behind the photograph of both the student and teacher being so close, but Sam on this cover does not look like a teacher due to his clothing. The phrasing of ‘Confrontation on Shearwater’ is not right as it takes up too much room and covers most of Becca’s face. I also learnt that both their eyes are not in the top third. I like the image of Lyndsey with her hood up however, and I hope to use this in my final product as it is a nice close up and it could be anchored with many soap style tag lines!
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